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Gehl: The Falling Scene by ~Blitzflame:iconBlitzflame:



“Tsume,“ I muttered a few hours before the gang’s leave for the warehouse ,“I-I-I’m coming with you.” It was The least I could do after Tsume after Tsume saved me from that white wolf yesterday right? I mean I owed him my life at least I could help him as much as I could.“ One little mission would be a piece of cake….No problem at all!”  I lied to Tsume. He nodded

In truth I was scared out of my wits. I mean robbing a train is one thing, there aren’t guards everywhere you look, just the occasion guard robot which someone else usually takes out seconds before it shoots a laser through your forehead, but an actual storage building with people on the watch twenty-four-seven! You’d have to be either crazy or desperate for food to steal from a place like that, but to keep Tsume’s opinion of my up I had to do it.

At first every thing seemed to be going excellent. Everyone had grabbed a box of food so we had enough to feed ourselves for at least a week , if not longer, but as we were sneaking out… a camera our technology expert, Sedo, had forgot to disable spotted us. An alarm was screaming bloody murder in seconds. Everyone else seemed completely used to this and frantically squeezed out the nearest door. I on the other hand was paralyzed in fear. Tsume literally had to push me out of the door to get me moving. But I once again stopped in my tracks. We were one the roof! Everyone else was jumping over on the unfinished building across the way. “ Move it Runt!” Tsume said as he pushed me forward. Things only went downhill for me from here. Not only could I not see where I was going, the box I was carrying was way to heavy for my wimpy arms to take. I ended up falling under its wait. And slipped on some ice that sent me strait toward off the edge. Luckily my timid nature had given me reflexes inhuman and I managed to get slight hold on one of the metal beams.

Hanging on for dear life I did the only thing I could think to do, “TSUME!! HELP I’M SLIPPING!”  He turned around lightning quick and a look of shock mixed with annoyance filled his face. He sprinted back and reached out his hand. But as his hand grasped my shoulder a sight even to scary for a horror movie happened. Before my very eyes Tsume changed altogether, His ears moved completely up his head and a muzzle soon fill where his face had been Grey fur covered his body in an instant and the teeth like 20 small daggers soon were piercing my flesh. To this day I’m not sure if Tsume was truly trying to save me or if he was attempting to get a bite out of me before I faced my death, either way though I pushed away from Tsume and felt the sensation of falling. I looked up to see my hat falling away from my head and Tsume back as his old self staring. His faced seemed to have mixed emotions. Frustration anger, and a twang of sadness thrown in the mix. The sensation continued and Tsume grew smaller and smaller and soon I could make out him speeding off as gunfire had started up after the guys. That sensation was sadly the last thing I ever felt before I blacked out.
©2008-2009 ~Blitzflame
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Author's Comments

Alright I have no idea what category to put this under ^^; I had to write it for my Language Arts Class and I figured it was decent enough to put on dA

If you've seen Wolf's Rain you recognize this scene. Its the whole Gehl Falling off of a Building scene and I figured "HEY LET'S WRITE THIS FROM GEHL'S POINT OF VIEW!!" :XD: Yeah it was a spurr of the moment thing and I know it should be a lot longer than it is I need to stretch out somethigns add some to the beginning. But yeah its a work in progress. I probably mis typed a bunch and need a better vocabulary XD but yeah it'll do

I might end up writing Wolf's Moon ( Sashimi's and a little of mine, I'm the small idea guy Fan Fiction of Wolf's Rain ) Through random point of views like this one once she's finished. You know taking an important character from the scene and writing it through there eyes? Dumb idea I know , but I felt a sort of happiness when I wrote this I wouldn't mind feeling it again :)

Oh and Sashimi I hope your not mad at me using your pic as a preview image. I needed one and well YOURS ARE TOO AWESOME TO RESIST :evillaugh:

Edit: Opps the image didn't go through. XD oh well

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IT'S THE APOCOLYPSE! THE END OF THE WORLD! BLITZFLAME UPLOADED A DEVIATION!!!!!!!!!!

*shot*

Hmm, I quite liked it :) I spotted a few grammar mistakes, but other than that, good. I've never seen Wolf's Rain, either, but I could imagine everything quite well. Good job ^^

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XD What I found histerical about that is that Wolf's Rain takes place around the time of the apocolypse LAWL but yeah I uploaded something. Everyone should run and hide under the nearest rock.:fear:

But Thanks! I wrote it for a school assignment so I probably should fix those. Blizty have Bad grammer skillsness ^^; Really? I don't think I went into enough detail. XD I mean I never described anyone or anything in detail. I'll try to keep posting =.3

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*attempts to bend Steel like Kiba* "Man, My fangs are way too delicate for this"
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...whoa...whoa...whoa...whoa.....HOLY FREAKING BANANA PEELS!!!!
THIS IS AWWEEESSSSOMMMMEEEEEEE! >.< write moar. more plz. XD
:3 :3 I was not expecting this at all! :3 IMGINE MY WONDERFUL SUPRISE. :3 :3 :3
*hugs* For language class? You like mah ideas THAT much?
ARIGATO!!! :3 :3

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:heart: I love my lil Blitzflame! So...NOBODY TOUCH HIM!! >0 :heart:
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" I can help you! Just tell me what to do! "~Gehl
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KEEP POSTING
(Y) / N

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"tough guys wear pink KITTY and say kitty at the end of every sentence KITTY" --Frosty
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whats (Y)/N mean :? XD

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*attempts to bend Steel like Kiba* "Man, My fangs are way too delicate for this"
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yes / no XD I circled yes

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"tough guys wear pink KITTY and say kitty at the end of every sentence KITTY" --Frosty
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OH I GET IT NOW!! X3333 DUH

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*attempts to bend Steel like Kiba* "Man, My fangs are way too delicate for this"
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BLITZY I BEEN TRYNNA IM YOU TODAY

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"tough guys wear pink KITTY and say kitty at the end of every sentence KITTY" --Frosty
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You Has!? *GASP*

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*attempts to bend Steel like Kiba* "Man, My fangs are way too delicate for this"

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